Monday, November 18, 2013

The Oldest Toy


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  1. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, crying. Reminiscing, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, caring and thoughtful, but she always loved this doll the most. Sad and hopeless, she looked down at the broken doll, disheartened.

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  2. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, with a slightly defecated look. Yearning, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, cheap but fun, but she always loved this doll the most. Depressed, she looked at the broken doll, with anguish.

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  3. Rachel started at her ruined doll, destroyed and broken. Enthusiastic, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, compassionately, but she always loved this doll the most. Disappointed, she looked at the broken doll, solemnly.

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  4. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, tattered and frayed. Once joyous and naïve, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, knowing that something was wrong, but she always loved this doll the most. Terrified, she looked down at the broken doll, currently humming the tune of ring around the rosy.

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  5. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, broken and battered. Very much attached, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, shiny and new, but she always loved this doll the most. Broken hearted, she looked down at the broken doll, teary eyed.

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  6. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, sad and upset. Excited, she played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, thinking it would help, but she always loved this doll the most. Shaking, she looked down at the broken doll, trying to move on.

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  7. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, sad. Entertaining, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, expensive and extravagant, but she always loved this doll the most. Depressed, she looked down at the broken doll, damaged.

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  8. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, horrified. As a child, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, trying to distract her from the old one, but she had always loved this doll the most. Growing angry, she looked down at the broken doll, shaking.

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  9. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, helpless. With joy, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, generous, but she always loved this doll the most. Melancholy, she looked down at the broken doll.

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  10. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, tattered and aged. As a young girl, she had played with the doll every day. Her parents had given her other toys, all new and shiny, but she always loved this doll the most. Struck with memories, she looked down at the broken doll, silent and awestruck.

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  11. The Oldest Toy
    Teary eyed, she looked down at the broken doll, causing more damage she picked it up, dropped to her knees, and cried ‘’how could this happen’’ she got up and ran to her parents to tell them what had happened, seeing that his daughter was very sad the father took the doll, got into his car and drove off. When he returned he went into his daughters room and gave her the box and said’ ‘’open it’’ she opened it and seen a new doll she took it out and hugged it and ran to her dad and gave him a big hug.

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  12. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, mangled and misshapen. Vivaciously, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, generously, but she had always loved this doll the most. Despairingly, she looked at the doll, broken.

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  13. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, worn and colorless. The toy was with her, since she was young, it was with her all the time. Gently, she had played with the toy every day. She played doctor, house, and occasionally had a tea party. Her parents had given her other toys, Expensive and fluffy, but she always loved this doll the most. Her golden ponytail, blue eyes like the ocean, and a pink blouse like a tulip. Crying, she looked down at the broken doll, destroyed.

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  14. “The Oldest Toy”

    Rachel stared at her ruined doll, gloomily. Joyously, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, kindly, but she always loved this doll the most. Disappointed, she looked down at the broken doll, ashamed.

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  15. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, worn-down and destroyed. Carefully, she played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, jolly and amusing, but she always loved that doll the most. Unsettled and mournful, she looked down at the broken doll, tattered and flawed.

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  16. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, broken and old. Always was excited, she played with it every day. Her parents had given her other toys, shiny and clean, but she always loved this doll the most. Full sadness, she looked down at the broken doll, dusty and ugly.

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  17. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, wishful. Very routinely, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, newer and more beautiful, but she had always loved that doll the most. Longingly, she looked down at the broken doll, very sadly and very unhappy.

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  18. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, old and forgotten. Saddened, she had played that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, brand new and amazing, but she always loved this doll the most. Happy, she looked down at the broken doll, Remembering the old days

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  19. The Oldest Toy
    Rachel stared at her ruined doll, old and destroyed. Jolly and cheerful, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, brand new and fun to play with, but she always loved this doll the most. Glum, she looked down at the broken doll, special and unique.

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  20. The Oldest Toy
    Rachel stared at her ruined doll, old and dusty. Joyfully, she played with that toy every day. Her parent’s gad given her other toys, new, shiny, and clean ones, but she always loved this doll the most. Tiredly, she looked down at the broken doll, old and dusty.

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  21. Rachel stared at her ruined toy, dismally. Joyously, she played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, generously, but she always loved this doll most. Long faced, she looked down at the broken doll, dolefully.

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  22. THE OLDEST TOY
    Rachell stared at her ruined doll, upset and destroyed. Happy and joyful, she played with that doll every day. Her parents had given her other toys, filled with cheer and generosity, but she always loved this doll the most. Helpless, she looked down at the broken doll, shattered.

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  23. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, angry as a troll. Excited, she had played with that doll every day. Her parents had given her other toys, stylish and fun, but she always loved this doll the most. Brokenhearted and upset, she looked down at the doll, very ripped, very stained.

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  24. Rachel stared at her ruined doll, sad and angry. Happy, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, delightful and shiny, but she always loved this doll the most. Disturbed and creepy, she looked at the broken doll, unhappy.

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  25. Rachel stared at her ruined doll,sad and frustrated. Once fascinated, she had played with that toy every day. Her parents had given her other toys, new and shiny, but she had always loved this doll the most. Solemnly, she looked down at the broken doll, old and torn.

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